The constant repeating of the same paragraphs randomly, and the atrocious use of question marks for apostrophes was very distracting. But you need to clean it up and resubmit it. Bhabhi sex I stopped right there and couldn’t keep reading. SEE?Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-17 17:34:39The story itself has potential. 15 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2014-06-13 14:18:53I louved thees story, and I am reeley lougged een. The constant repeating of the same paragraphs randomly, and the atrocious use of question marks for apostrophes was very distracting. It’s very distracting when you’re interested in a part, then suddenly it repeats several paragraphs.«123» I don’t like insest. The constant repeating of the same paragraphs randomly, and the atrocious use of question marks for apostrophes was very distracting. I don’t like insest. Get yourself an editor.anonymous readerReport 2013-02-18 05:01:06I was enjoying it until it got to the part about her parents passing out. 15 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2014-06-13 14:18:53I louved thees story, and I am reeley lougged een.
