6/10Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-27 04:18:57real good but the BEERREADERReport 2008-01-05 19:48:25fuck the beer the story kicked ass KEEP the stories comingREADERReport 2007-11-27 22:44:46dude awesome story but what about the beer you need the beer«12345» learn about dialog and paragraphs. Desi xxx 49 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-24 15:32:59needs a major rewrite the paragraphs started good but got way to long at the end. 6/10Anonymous readerReport 2008-10-27 04:18:57real good but the BEERREADERReport 2008-01-05 19:48:25fuck the beer the story kicked ass KEEP the stories comingREADERReport 2007-11-27 22:44:46dude awesome story but what about the beer you need the beer«12345» way to much boring stuff and way to rushed what happened here in one day should be spread out over months. 49 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-24 15:32:59needs a major rewrite the paragraphs started good but got way to long at the end. 49 comments«12345»anonymous readerReport 2013-01-24 15:32:59needs a major rewrite the paragraphs started good but got way to long at the end. learn about dialog and paragraphs. way to much boring stuff and way to
