also, the story was not terrible.LustdemonReport 2009-03-14 15:43:25This was a horror story and it was not to my taste.The main criticism I would make is that you did not categorise the story correctly. Hindi bf also, the story was not terrible.LustdemonReport 2009-03-14 15:43:25This was a horror story and it was not to my taste.The main criticism I would make is that you did not categorise the story correctly. This is a very dark story and the many readers would initally be expecting something a bit more light hearted from the catgorisation and the title. Otherwise, the story was well written.Report 2009-03-03 17:16:05wowREADERReport 2007-02-26 19:16:02I only read a very small portion of this, before I realised that everyone else was right. This is a very dark story and the many readers would initally be expecting something a bit more light hearted from the catgorisation and the title. I believe you need help.«123» I believe you need help.«123» This is a very dark story
