Sentence, ”then climbed on too of me” HUH? ”Of course” is two words. xxx hd But I’ve never seen it used anywhere, other than here. ”Eachother” can be spelled as one word. ”Of course” is two words. ”High school” is two words. ”Eachother” can be spelled as one word. so just some minor criticism. I look forward to see what you do with your characters in the next chapter.anonymous readerReport 2012-12-15 07:48:15haha love ur writing style 😀
-Awkward. maybe it should have been … ”then climbed up on to my lap.” Otherwise this was a really great story. What the fuck man. ”Of course” is two words. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-25 16:35:49Well ”almost” no spelling mistakes. maybe it should have been … ”then climbed up on to my lap.” Otherwise this was a really great story.
