But yeah, don’t switch so much between scenes. xxx hd no more incest… the first chapter was good.. You need more segues between events.«1» this is just confusing.gayboyReport 2008-06-05 00:45:44its to confusing.i dont know who is whoREADERReport 2007-12-24 12:28:23I loved the first chapter. no more incest… this is just confusing.gayboyReport 2008-06-05 00:45:44its to confusing.i dont know who is whoREADERReport 2007-12-24 12:28:23I loved the first chapter. But yeah, don’t switch so much between scenes. You need more segues between events.«1» you have less and less gay sex…Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-23 16:33:42okay. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . … Make the switches new chapters or something.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-05 03:09:55no no no no… You need more segues between events.«1» Make the switches new chapters or something.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-05 03:09:55no no no no… no more incest… it is ruining the story line… no more incest… Just work on making the stories longer and making the transitions make more sense.
