4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-10 15:57:18good story keep goinganonymous readerReport 2013-07-10 15:56:33the format was bad but I see you fixed that in the following part so good job. Desi xxx but great first story and I am looking forward to the next part, plus do not worry about bad comments there will always be some asshole who cant make a decent post so right onanonymous readerReport 2013-06-28 11:53:04paragraphs, please. but great first story and I am looking forward to the next part, plus do not worry about bad comments there will always be some asshole who cant make a decent post so right onanonymous readerReport 2013-06-28 11:53:04paragraphs, please. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-10 15:57:18good story keep goinganonymous readerReport 2013-07-10 15:56:33the format was bad but I see you fixed that in the following part so good job.
