keep writing, but sex story or not grammar is a big thing in any story.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-31 22:43:53hmm.. how do i put this nicely… Mom xxx keep writing, but sex story or not grammar is a big thing in any story.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-31 22:43:53hmm.. decent story i suppose, but i really do have to agree with the sum of the above comments; you really need to proof read your stories. ur story sucksREADERReport 2007-10-07 23:00:04dude u fucking suckREADERReport 2007-02-03 21:59:24story was fine, it would help iff you had a proof reader to fix the fuck ups. keep writing, but sex story or not grammar is a big thing in any story.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-31 22:43:53hmm.. Igave you a 5/10«12» keep on writingREADERReport 2006-10-14 18:04:51I don’t know what is true and what is fantasy,at least
it is not a father/daughter a sister thing or a uncle/niece fuck job.
