I picture what I’m reading in my head, like watching a movie in my mind. Xxx hindi There’s a reason your story has the rating it does… I picture what I’m reading in my head, like watching a movie in my mind. 5 s«1»AnnistaysiaReport 2014-12-17 05:54:00I’ll be honest with you… Not to sound like a bitch, but; Your character description is highly lacking, your grammer is terrible and your over all your use of description is next to none. When I read, whether it’s a book, short story, fan fiction, etc… On a different note, however, You set this story up fairly decently. 5 s«1»AnnistaysiaReport 2014-12-17 05:54:00I’ll be honest with you… Which was done well right in the beginning when you described your charecter in the closet. On a different note, however, You set this story up fairly decently. Not to sound like a bitch, but; Your character description is highly lacking, your grammer is terrible and your over all
