37 comments«12345»READERReport 2006-06-06 02:45:02It was a good story. i thought the ending was a bit rushed but overall a good story«12345» Washington to almost anywhere?Now that makes it too hard to believe.Next time try the incline.READERReport 2005-06-04 04:28:26If you are going to criticise other writers’ punctuation, don’t you think you should check your own? Desi xxx i thought the ending was a bit rushed but overall a good story«12345» i thought the ending was a bit rushed but overall a good story«12345» 1/10 only because there is no lower rating.READERReport 2005-06-01 07:12:53good story i wish my neighbourhood was like that. 1/10 only because there is no lower rating.READERReport 2005-06-01 07:12:53good story i wish my neighbourhood was like that. Washington to almost anywhere?Now that makes it too hard to believe.Next time try the incline.READERReport 2005-06-04 04:28:26If you are going to criticise other writers’ punctuation, don’t you think you should check your own? 1/10 only because there is no lower rating.READERReport 2005-06-01 07:12:53good story i wish
