Story wasn’t all that horrible but too much “talking” through out. Please correct grammer and spelling in part 2 and I’ll be sure to check it out. xxx video Story wasn’t all that horrible but too much “talking” through out. cant wait for the next one .. Good luck.READERReport 2004-06-30 13:03:42suktREADERReport 2004-06-15 16:11:13well I liked this story . . … Good luck.READERReport 2004-06-30 13:03:42suktREADERReport 2004-06-15 16:11:13well I liked this story . . … Please correct grammer and spelling in part 2 and I’ll be sure to check it out. cant wait for the next one .. cant wait for the next one .. great work«12» great work«12» Please correct grammer and spelling in part 2 and I’ll be sure to check it out. Story wasn’t all that horrible but too much “talking” through out. Good luck.READERReport 2004-06-30 13:03:42suktREADERReport 2004-06-15 16:11:13well I liked this story . . … Good luck.READERReport 2004-06-30 13:03:42suktREADERReport 2004-06-15 16:11:13well I liked this story . . …
