But I did finish it. desi sex It had good detail, and a back story, and whatnot. 1 s«1»ClyReport 2013-08-23 19:38:00It was OK. It had good detail, and a back story, and whatnot. The sex part could have been longer, but then again, I tend to make mine a little short as well. I just didn’t get sucked in. But I did finish it. The sex part could have been longer, but then again, I tend to make mine a little short as well. The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site. Good job over all!«1» But I did finish it. I just didn’t get sucked in. The grammar and spelling were good enough, much better than most others on this site. Good job over all!«1» But I did finish it. This story lacked something, and I can’t put my finger on it.
