Got me hard, especially the spanking, but I hadn’t come by the time I got tothe end!READERReport 2004-12-29 08:36:39Thanks…some people have complained that other stories are too long…ha, ha.!READERReport 2004-12-28 16:40:21The theme is right, I liked the setup of the sex scene. Village sex You don’t build up the sexual tension in this one like before. Maybe the problem is that the story is too short and also lacks the “sexyness” of your previous works. You don’t build up the sexual tension in this one like before. You don’t build up the sexual tension in this one like before. Just my opinion, though. Just my opinion, though. Don’t discourage for this. Thanks!READERReport 2005-07-16 11:03:44Well, things are better now and I’m on the verge of a new job which will mean more lonely time in hotels (giving me the opportunity to write again!). Thanks for the lovely comments.
