13 comments«123»sk_liaReport 2010-12-22 18:55:38Brilliant story! Hindi bf You found the line of submission without being corny. I liked both characters and the situation. There was no BS, there was no guy stroking his own ego(most likely because a female wrote it), the plot and setting was completely straightforward, and you didn’t only write about one aspect of the situation. There was no BS, there was no guy stroking his own ego(most likely because a female wrote it), the plot and setting was completely straightforward, and you didn’t only write about one aspect of the situation. mmmmmm. …Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-09 16:02:31i want to be a slaveAnonymous readerReport 2009-07-27 22:20:51Nice story. And even though you didn’t get into the guy’s point of view too much, you still let people understand his point of view.«123» Can’t wait to read more.baller16Report 2009-07-25 20:57:31I liked it. I always get wet reading this.Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-20 19:03:02Do you do guys too?
