Some writing tips:
Go for an open setting and try to keep the characters believable. And centairly use the hint about there being two more girls /guys like him.Anonymous readerReport 2013-12-21 12:46:29Glad someone is reviving the seriesanonymous readerReport 2013-12-12 20:38:13convoluted,,, disjointed,,, in parts even hard to comprehend what you are writing about«123» (Just be aware that others might think you are really weird in doing that!)Anonymous readerReport 2014-01-06 06:58:07great story looking forward to part 3Anonymous readerReport 2013-12-24 23:36:54Great story. Village sex I suggest you write a description of the personalities of your characters and a small bio (it’s not necessary for the main character) and then stick to it. I hope you give it a twist instead of just “bang sisters, all romantic with juliet, story out”. I suggest you write a description of the personalities of your characters and a small bio (it’s not necessary for the main character) and then stick to it.
