What you want to do is have the story in your head recreated in the head of your reader, exactly the same as it is in yours. Desi xxx Please read it. that was just bad.anonymous readerReport 2011-10-30 07:11:52STOP WRITTING! What you want to do is have the story in your head recreated in the head of your reader, exactly the same as it is in yours. Please read it. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-11-02 12:39:44I’m not sure what word processing program you used to write the story with, but I would suggest that you use one with a grammar tool. Transforming a story in your head to a story in print is an art. Please read it. Transforming a story in your head to a story in print is an art. It will allow you to see some of the tools of the language we call Standard English.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-02 12:39:17I’m not sure what word processing program you used to write
