what a shame, I was enjoying this up to the last 3 chapters…Anonymous readerReport 2015-08-28 14:55:24I would highly recommend you get a good proof reader. Aunty sex 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2017-01-20 10:15:22@djb: Getting jealous are we?djb8247Report 2015-08-29 03:23:09It now seems (to me at least) that you have definitely lost the plot, too much going on, and now it seems to be just sheer unadulterated, PURE RUBBISH. 13 comments«123»Anonymous readerReport 2017-01-20 10:15:22@djb: Getting jealous are we?djb8247Report 2015-08-29 03:23:09It now seems (to me at least) that you have definitely lost the plot, too much going on, and now it seems to be just sheer unadulterated, PURE RUBBISH. Keep writing your stories . … what a shame, I was enjoying this up to the last 3 chapters…Anonymous readerReport 2015-08-28 14:55:24I would highly recommend you get a good proof reader. with some help please.Anonymous readerReport 2014-12-26 06:39:29Lol.
