the first chapter was good.. desi sex 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-14 20:58:48Nice twist with the sister being a he/she or he a guy raised as a girl. it is ruining the story line… this is just confusing.gayboyReport 2008-06-05 00:45:44its to confusing.i dont know who is whoREADERReport 2007-12-24 12:28:23I loved the first chapter. the first chapter was good.. no more incest… it is ruining the story line… Make the switches new chapters or something.Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-05 03:09:55no no no no… this is just confusing.gayboyReport 2008-06-05 00:45:44its to confusing.i dont know who is whoREADERReport 2007-12-24 12:28:23I loved the first chapter. the first chapter was good.. no more incest… But yeah, don’t switch so much between scenes. this is just confusing.gayboyReport 2008-06-05 00:45:44its to confusing.i dont know who is whoREADERReport 2007-12-24 12:28:23I loved the first chapter. you have less and less gay sex…Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-23 16:33:42okay. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . … Just work on making the stories longer and making the transitions make more sense. the first chapter was good.. Make the switches new chapters
