also, a character description lets people picture your story more vividly. But most men need somewhere in between 5 and 20 minutes to fully recover after cum’ing. Village sex you just need to be more descriptive with the actual sex. Men can’t have mutiple orgams, like some women are capable of. it has potential to be good. But it’s a nice try. the formatting was good and the paragraph length was good. tell us that she looks up into his clear blue eyes, or that he brushes her long blond hair away from her face while she’s blowing him… With training we can learn to stay hard even after we cum, and keep it that way for a while, some even long enough for them to get “naturally” hard again. the formatting was good and the paragraph length was good. you just need to be more descriptive with the actual sex. i’m waiting to see how your writing
