Well done.anonymous readerReport 2010-10-27 04:14:55Awesome story reading from a girls point of view is really greatanonymous readerReport 2010-10-27 03:24:04Awesome story reading from a girls point of view is really greatwordytomReport 2008-11-07 17:47:13Suggestion, if you wish to try stream of consciousness writing, make it flow smoothly. Mom xxx Good luck and keep writingAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-04 12:02:46iv read the first chapter and just started this one and i like it alot so fuck the ones hating«12345» It’s great! Well done.anonymous readerReport 2010-10-27 04:14:55Awesome story reading from a girls point of view is really greatanonymous readerReport 2010-10-27 03:24:04Awesome story reading from a girls point of view is really greatwordytomReport 2008-11-07 17:47:13Suggestion, if you wish to try stream of consciousness writing, make it flow smoothly. For the amateur writer it is best to stick with straight narrative and let the story unroll event at a time. Good luck and keep writingAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-04 12:02:46iv read the first chapter and just started this one and i like it alot so fuck
