Also, think about continuity and having even a fantasy make sense.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-25 21:42:31Pretty great story. Telugu sex With not much detail. Detail matters. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-09-06 11:10:21It would have been an alright story line if u knew how to write properly. Detail matters. You should definitely make a part two. And I agree with the other comment about being a virgin thing. A spell check run would have caught many errors. You should definitely make a part two. It felt like you were just listing everything that happened. It felt like you were just listing everything that happened. With not much detail. Also, think about continuity and having even a fantasy make sense.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-25 21:42:31Pretty great story. But still like I said, a great story 10/10«1» 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-09-06 11:10:21It would have been an alright story line if u knew how to write properly. Detail matters. With not much detail. But 1 thing is you said she was
