The story may only slightly gain but u have learned. Indian xxx . The story may only slightly gain but u have learned. Even the end . Well done. Then the chance of not getting some knowing looks and Sniggers from pals a tent flap away!? Unless uve got a wise knowing friend to run it past. . please continueAnonymous readerReport 2009-02-26 22:39:19I think it was great!!!!«12» Writing.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-19 01:39:43a nice story but a quick end, next time try to create some more dramaYoungAuthorReport 2009-03-07 16:08:39not bad at all! Even the end . The story may only slightly gain but u have learned. Well done. But release after YOUR final check. No matter how asleep they were. Unless uve got a wise knowing friend to run it past. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-07-26 14:24:24Sequal pleaseAnonymous readerReport 2009-10-26 11:07:41Good story well told. . But release after YOUR final check. please continueAnonymous readerReport 2009-02-26 22:39:19I think it was great!!!!«12»
