good start though. With training we can learn to stay hard even after we cum, and keep it that way for a while, some even long enough for them to get “naturally” hard again. xxx video hd Also, a factual problem which is somewhat off putting and severely challenges the credibility of your story. the formatting was good and the paragraph length was good. Men can’t have mutiple orgams, like some women are capable of. good start though. It would be nice if you could give the story a kind of “natural flow”. Also, a factual problem which is somewhat off putting and severely challenges the credibility of your story. Ex. It would be nice if you could give the story a kind of “natural flow”. also, a character description lets people picture your story more vividly. you just need to be more descriptive with the actual sex. I wish you luck in your future attempts at writing :)anonymous
